2016年12月六级14分范文：发明的重要性-袁雨斌老师
2016年12月阅卷组14分高分范文
【无注解版范文】
Invention has always been crucial to human society as it has pushed us all the way through history to where we are in this modern world. To put it more clearly, inventions bring us with innovative technologies that significantly alter the way we live and improve the quality of our lives. For instance, the invention of motor cars has rendered it possible for people to travel fast and conveniently, pulling people closer to each other. The creation of computers has enabled scientists to deal with large amounts of data in seconds, which was previously beyond the capability of human mind.
Important as invention is, it is by no means an easy task to come up with something new. Thus measures need to be taken to encourage it. First欧阳炳强 , schools should focus more on the cultivation of creativity among students through programs and activities. Second, government should give more financial rewards to individuals and institutions that have made ingenious inventions. Third万籁俱寂造句, law for intellectual property protection needs to be formulated and enforced more effectively.
In a nutshell, invention is significant to a country’s development. Therefore, measures need to be taken educationally,马笑舒 financially and legally to boost it.
【双语注解版范文】
Invention has always been crucial [重要的]to human society as it has pushed[推动]us all the way throughhistory to where[地点状语从句]we are in this modern world. To put it more clearly[清楚地]娄清 , inventions bring us with innovative[创新的]technologies that significantly[显著地]alter[改变]the way we live and improve the quality of our lives. For instance[例如]赶尸笔记 , the invention of motor cars has rendered [使得]it possiblefor people to travel fast and conveniently[便利地]孙绍骋 , pulling[拉近]people closer to each other. The creation of computers has enabled scientists to deal with large amounts of data in seconds, which[非限定性定语从句]was previously[之前地]beyond the capability of human mind.
一直以来，发明对于人类社会都极为重要，因为在历史上它将我们推动到现如今的现代社会。说得更明白些蒂娜克斯 ，发明带给我们创新的技术，这些技术显著地改变了我们的生活方式并提高了我们的生活品质。例如，汽车的发明使得人们可以快速地、便利地旅行，拉近了人与人之间的距离。电脑的发明使得科学家可以在几秒钟的时间中处理大量的数据，这在之前是超出人类大脑的能力。
Important as[尽管：倒装句]invention is, it is by no means[绝对不]an easy task to come up with something new. Thus measures need to be taken to encourage it. First, schools should focus more on the cultivation[培养]of creativity among students through programs and activities. Second, government should give more financial rewards[奖励]to individuals and institutions that have made ingenious[有独创性的]inventions. Third, law for intellectualproperty[知识产权]protection needs to be formulated[制定]and enforced more effectively[有效地].
无论如何想到新的东西不是一件易事，尽管发明是很重要的。因此，需要采取措施来鼓励发明。首先，学校需要通过项目和活动来更多地关注学生创造力的培养。其次，政府需要向那些做出独创性发明的个人和机构提供更多的财政奖励。第三，需要制定知识产权保护的有关法律，并且更有效地执行这些法律。
In a nutshell[简而言之], invention is significant to a country’s development. Therefore, measures need to be taken educationally[教育上地], financially[财政上] andlegally[法律上地]to boost[推动]it.
简而言之，发明对于一个国家的发展很重要。因此boc酸酐 ，需要从教育上、财政上和法律上采取一些措施来推动发明创造。
【高分亮点分析】
1. 高端词替换低级词：
crucial-important
rendered it possible-make it possible
by no means-not
2. 复杂句式-简单句
For instance, the invention of motor cars has rendered it possible for people to travel fast and conveniently, pulling people closer to each other.
3. 副词的妙用
Therefore, measures need to be taken educationally, financially and legally to boost it.
2016年12月阅卷组14分高分范文
【无注解版范文】
Invention has always been crucial to human society as it has pushed us all the way through history to where we are in this modern world. To put it more clearly, inventions bring us with innovative technologies that significantly alter the way we live and improve the quality of our lives. For instance, the invention of motor cars has rendered it possible for people to travel fast and conveniently, pulling people closer to each other. The creation of computers has enabled scientists to deal with large amounts of data in seconds, which was previously beyond the capability of human mind.
Important as invention is, it is by no means an easy task to come up with something new. Thus measures need to be taken to encourage it. First欧阳炳强 , schools should focus more on the cultivation of creativity among students through programs and activities. Second, government should give more financial rewards to individuals and institutions that have made ingenious inventions. Third万籁俱寂造句, law for intellectual property protection needs to be formulated and enforced more effectively.
In a nutshell, invention is significant to a country’s development. Therefore, measures need to be taken educationally,马笑舒 financially and legally to boost it.
【双语注解版范文】
Invention has always been crucial [重要的]to human society as it has pushed[推动]us all the way throughhistory to where[地点状语从句]we are in this modern world. To put it more clearly[清楚地]娄清 , inventions bring us with innovative[创新的]technologies that significantly[显著地]alter[改变]the way we live and improve the quality of our lives. For instance[例如]赶尸笔记 , the invention of motor cars has rendered [使得]it possiblefor people to travel fast and conveniently[便利地]孙绍骋 , pulling[拉近]people closer to each other. The creation of computers has enabled scientists to deal with large amounts of data in seconds, which[非限定性定语从句]was previously[之前地]beyond the capability of human mind.
一直以来，发明对于人类社会都极为重要，因为在历史上它将我们推动到现如今的现代社会。说得更明白些蒂娜克斯 ，发明带给我们创新的技术，这些技术显著地改变了我们的生活方式并提高了我们的生活品质。例如，汽车的发明使得人们可以快速地、便利地旅行，拉近了人与人之间的距离。电脑的发明使得科学家可以在几秒钟的时间中处理大量的数据，这在之前是超出人类大脑的能力。
Important as[尽管：倒装句]invention is, it is by no means[绝对不]an easy task to come up with something new. Thus measures need to be taken to encourage it. First, schools should focus more on the cultivation[培养]of creativity among students through programs and activities. Second, government should give more financial rewards[奖励]to individuals and institutions that have made ingenious[有独创性的]inventions. Third, law for intellectualproperty[知识产权]protection needs to be formulated[制定]and enforced more effectively[有效地].
无论如何想到新的东西不是一件易事，尽管发明是很重要的。因此，需要采取措施来鼓励发明。首先，学校需要通过项目和活动来更多地关注学生创造力的培养。其次，政府需要向那些做出独创性发明的个人和机构提供更多的财政奖励。第三，需要制定知识产权保护的有关法律，并且更有效地执行这些法律。
In a nutshell[简而言之], invention is significant to a country’s development. Therefore, measures need to be taken educationally[教育上地], financially[财政上] andlegally[法律上地]to boost[推动]it.
简而言之，发明对于一个国家的发展很重要。因此boc酸酐 ，需要从教育上、财政上和法律上采取一些措施来推动发明创造。
【高分亮点分析】
1. 高端词替换低级词：
crucial-important
rendered it possible-make it possible
by no means-not
2. 复杂句式-简单句
For instance, the invention of motor cars has rendered it possible for people to travel fast and conveniently, pulling people closer to each other.
3. 副词的妙用
Therefore, measures need to be taken educationally, financially and legally to boost it.